Monday, November 23, 2009
OMG You're So Cool
She's hot. There's no denying it. Everything about her makes you want to die of jealousy. She has the best choice in clothes and shoes. Her looks are breathtaking. Her voice amazing. And she's not just one of those people who know they're hot and treat others like less than them. She actually helps her community, does petitions for things she believes in, is in all of the clubs you can possibly think of, and on top of that is a straight A student. She's the picture perfect daughter, an unbelievable role model to her younger siblings, and can pose on Playboy and still look angelic and perfect. She's everything I want to be and yet nothing I can be.
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I like the way you described your protagonist. You make it apparent from the start that she's cool and very desirable. She seems very very upstanding a kind. And yet, not the popular kind of cool. She seems more like the kind of person people like and think is very nice.
ReplyDeleteHello, this was nice. Basically a list of awesome qualities that would be nice to possess. I liked that you basically gave your definition of cool and what it means to be cool.
ReplyDeleteDo you think that all those qualities can actually mix? What does society say about a mixing of those qualities?
All in all this was interesting.
Yazy-yaz
ReplyDeletei like how you described your character as someone everybody wants, and yet didnt make her a completely idiot or bitch, like most people do do when they think of "cool" people. Its refreshing.
I also like the last line you used "she's everything i want to be and yet nothing i can be", kind of poetic, nice way to end it.
Hi, your hero here
ReplyDeleteI liked your story. It portrays that a cool person not only stands up to people's expectations, but also manages to be themselves, and do good with their abilities. Honestly, that may be something that is really hard to do for a lot of people, but its doable, and I think it is also worth looking up to
i like how you put your story into a outside person kinda. you descried this chick as a "cool" character and how she acts. you put a typical outline of a cool person in the beginning but you also twisted it up with how she was also a good person the her community and how she had a positive influence on things. and by reading your story thats your point of view of being cool.
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